appendix A

Four Formatting Styles: example posts

 

¬ The  "simulated turn-taking" style: more 'involved', via overt interactivity

ˆ related to the notion of "interrupting" in speech, this style selects for TRPs throughout another's contribution, and simulates turn-taking in order to create the interactivity.

 

TEXT1:

[tvs72.11]

Date: Mon, 10 May 1999 19:18:55 -0700

From: spr@email

Subject: Re: friction, bs meter

 

 

[i]Terry,

 

[S1] Your post pretty much confirms what I've been saying. The subject heading is "friction, bs meter" yet you say nothing about "bs meter" -- it just hangs there in the title like a forgotten angry appendage. Moreover, you somehow manage to post a palpably angry response to me and still deny you have any feelings about me or what I've written. Amazing.

 

[T2] >You took issue, Stan, with my occasional practice, early in the list's history, of expressing my ideas in free verse, instead of prose. As though I were violating some discourse rule.

 

[S3] The "rule" I had in mind was, and is, a personal value judgment: that discussants should strive for clarity, not obscurity. With your verse, and later often with your prose, you seem to opt for the latter. I find this habit of yours frustrating and seemingly easy to remedy if you only chose to do so, thus I comment on it from time to time. If you'd like to argue that my values are off-base my expression of them pisses you off

you do strive for clarity but regretfully miss the mark you *were* clear, and my reading is faulty etc

 

[S3a] well, I'm all ears.

 

[T4] >We were in mild contention over the con/aff issue. (I didn't feel very involved in that; I thought it was somebody else's issue, mostly.) Again, it seemed to me that you were attempting to enforce a particular model of "how communication should be" on the list.

 

[S5] Guilty as charged. I wanted NetDynam to discuss net dynamics, not force-fit a breezy notion of "community" by promoting gossipy "affinity" posts. Both camps "attempted to enforce" a particular model of how communication should be on the list. Again, the difference is, I cop to it and you don't.

 

[T6] >Since then, whenever I mention con/aff, you're moved to refer back to what you see as 'the real meaning of the aff side in the disagreement'. Suggesting, I think, that I missreport or twist it when I say "affect".

 

[S7] Yes, exactly. For you *do* misreport it. Repeatedly. Best I recall, neither I nor anyone else who favored on-topic CONtent opposed discussion of AFFect in that context. We opposed a heavy diet of AFFinity posts consciously aimed to promote "community". Is there some part of this you don't understand? Do you recall it differently? Do you repeatedly misreport it in order to express your own anger, and/or to piss me off? I'm beginning to wonder.

 

[T8] >You accused me recently of attacking Gene and defending Kaylene, "couching my criticism in sneaky intellectualism." Another disapproval of *how* I wrote. I didn't feel then like either an attacker nor a defender.

 

[S9] As you like. Shall we pull the material out of the archives and take a vote of the readership? Maybe my interpretation is idiosyncratic. Maybe you convey feelings you don't realize.

 

[T10] >And now I'm supposed to admit my anger, toward the end of improving our communication. Anger toward whom? You? Again, you attribute this anger, 'hidden in long paragraphs,' to me on the basis of a text style of which you disapprove. (Am I reading you right, here? That you disapprove of those long paragraphs [...]

 

[S11] Long paragraphs are fine with me, Terry. I feel annoyed by contortions of writing or speech, whether in verse or tangential meandering prose, that apparently exist to obscure communication, especially of affect. See the "discourse rule" above.

 

[T12] >Mars criticised me for not turning the anger attribution back on you. She thought you were projecting your own anger onto me. Since I can't find any anger in myself toward you, I wonder if she was right.

 

[S13] We'll each have our own impressions of this. It may ultimately resolve as an "agree to disagree" thing. If it interests the group to pursue it, I'm curious how others have perceived our exchanges. I note that since ND has no gators to fight, our baF tendencies lie dormant and no one has had much to say lately. Maybe this'll spice it up?

 

[ii] Stan

 

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¬ The "relevance - in" style:

- references the part which respondent selects as encapsulating original Addresser's message/ point, or

-references the point the respondee wishes to address/comment on/ answer, or

-references the point which the respondee needs to make sense of for listeners, to clarify, or augment

 

TEXT 2:

Date:    Tue, 20 May 1997 08:04:22 +0000

From:    "simon" <simon@EMAIL>

Subject: Re: "Just Say Delete" (Was: Re: a last bouquet)

 

John:

 

> The analogies of "diner/coffeehouse" and

>"informal seminar" are both ways of

> representing the importance of informality and a social > side as opposed to a complete task focus.

> 

> Some years ago I did some research for a minor thesis

> looking at the effectiveness of task groups within three > organizations.  Two of the factors influencing the

> effectiveness of the groups were Task Leadership and

> Socio-emotional Leadership.

 

 

1 The concept of "task," has a rich history here.  2 Not only is there a common sense meaning of task as the job to be done, but it is a technical term in Bion's group psychology.  3 I have been one to see task as analogy -- harking back to its roots in "tax" or an onerous tribute to be paid.  4 In Bion, it has more positive connotations, and being a work group in accomplishment of a task is not only healthy but morally good.  5 It is hard to mesh all this.  6 I set out to work at the warehouse this morning.  7 I will have a task, I suppose, or various ones.  8 I must unload some trucks.  9 I must aid the company in any legit way to help it make a profit.  10 I must fit myself into the sometimes odd social scheme there.  11 My goal, however, for this day is to have as pleasant and as delightful a day as I can -- to tell no lies, hurt no one on purpose, and be a good citizen while squeezing the best out of whatever situation I may encounter.  12 Out of this fluid plan for the day, one that will most likely materialize, which activities constitute 'tasks.'

 

13 On email the concept becomes even more difficult.  14 We must converse in writing, I suppose.  15 Maybe it is our job to survive, but it is hard tosee why that would be all important. 16 We ought to address things like the net, or groups on the net, or groups in general or ourselves on the net.  17 So if the posts are like that are we on task.  18 I wonder if it is not in the nature of 'task' to create a certain ambience -- use academic words, or technical words, or words which are culturally associated with "work" and pain and paying our dues.  Seminars, maybe, instead of diners.  19 But then at my company, the management meetings are held in diners.  20 Attending a seminar would be viewed suspiciously as a waste of valuable company time while being part of the collection in the diner across the street is considered a promotion earned by keeping ones nose to the grindstone.

 

21 Netd has often been "taken to task" for not sticking to its task.  22 Yet in many ways we are quite productive.  23 If one considers the work of our members to be partially group product, we produce academic papers, we have an extensive web page to orient interested folks to our customs and history, we have a private IRC channel to meet in real time, and we produce a large data collection for use in psychological and socio-linguistic research.  24 I know groups who accomplish, in some sort of objective sense, far less, yet would be held up as paragons of staying on task.

 

25 I wonder if "task" is not a bit like the physicist's "force" or Sandra's "power."  26 "Force" has its roots in the action of human muscle and is one of the base analogies of science that defies definition except by pointing at resultant circumstances (ie, the cup fell and is now on the floor - thus the 'force' of gravity).  27 Or maybe as our quiet emlove suggests, it is like 'power' and arguably pornography -- everybody just knows what it is and if we follow Wittgenstein and just use it correctly all will be well -- thereby suggesting discussion of task

can never be on task.

 

28 Oh well. 29 I can still resolve to enjoy the day and squeeze the most out of the hours providence has provided.  30 So off to the forklifts.

 

         Simon

 

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¬ The "post that motivated me" style

- I hit reply and just started typing, then sent.

- I don't know whether the relevance of this will be obvious to all if I don't include (some of) the original at the end.

 

TEXT 3:

 [gen02.7]

Date:  Sun, 3 Feb 2002 04:19:09 -0800

From: harry  < harry@email >

Subject:  Re: Excuse me but I couldn't resist!

 

 

 Aggression? poll after poll show tit for tat, more than that, response is what the public hankers for, thinks is right & just. Aggression is key. Aggression is cool. Bomb *them* and let god sort em out.

 

You're right, Sandra it's not funny.

 

And yet using the innocence of small children as a rouge is a stock device of humor. Violence is a stock device. Surprise^, too.

It seems to work at about stage one-two of Kohlberg's morality stages or whatever, e.g. pre-adolescent socializing!

 

Since everyone went through those stages incorporating "other" into their worldview, we've mostly experienced it and can respond from it very easily, which, as I say, the American public seems to want to do.

 

That's not funny.

Little kids w/ eyes to blow something to smithereens -- that's normal!

 

Sandra  < ---@--- > wrote:

>Dan, unsurprisingly, I don't find this at all funny.

>Starting from here:

> 

on 2/2/02 9:14 PM, Dan M H-- at < dan@email > wrote:

>> 

>>d."

>> 

>>You see, I don't think the problem is that the >>individual called Osama bin Laden doesn't know how to >>love people.

>>d

> 

>I detect a considerable amount of aggression, you could >call it hate, in that punchline. I don't think bin >Laden's the only one with an emotional problem.

> 

>Sandra

 

 

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¬ The "non-indicated" (I don't need to indicate relevance - you find it) type

ˆ this style points to a more dialogistic orientation rather than a less interactive one: there is less simulated dialogic interactivity, but relative 'involvement' may be higher.

 

TEXT 4:

 [gen02.12]

Date: Mon, 4 Feb 2002 09:14:19 +1100

From: Rob W- < rob@email >

Subject: Why the joke isn't funny

 

It ain't the hate. If jokes weren't largely about aggression, why call it a "punchline"?  It's the lack of wit  - where wit is partly in the structure of the joke, partly in the parting of the veil at the end of the joke to reveal, or better, imply, the true nature of the hate.

 

I don't think the joke's about hating Osama. It doesn't argue his hatefulness or even assert it   - it's just assumed from the beginning of the joke. Try substituting Hitler, Arafat or Farrakhan for Osama and see how much the joke is changed.

The question is, what's wrong with young David? In relation to hatred, who whom?

I read the beginning of the joke as establishing a problem:

why does a Jewish boy want to send a valentine to Osama?

Would God mind? Of course not - God is love, the God of those namby-pamby peace-marchin'. tree-huggin, feminist- marryin' jews who think Arik Sharon is a war criminal.

But if you even thought of asking the true G*d for permission to send a valentine the next seven generations of your offspring would get boils and bad breath.

 

The tension in the joke stays hidden, which is one reason the joke fails. It's a political joke about the hatred of the G*d- fearing for the god-loving.

 

 

Rob

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